Thursday, 26 August 2010



We have been writing narratives using 2 character cards and a setting card. Read Paige's story and see if you can guess the 2 characters and the setting.

Once upon a time there was a Red Indian who lived in a sea deep amongst the rocks and seaweed. There was a Mummy too. "Who is there?" said the Red Indian but there was no answer to be heard. "Oh" said the Red Indian but really it was the Mummy playing a trick. Then the Mummy jumped on into the sea and chased the Red Indian. The Red Indian died and so did the Mummy.

2 comments:

tia said...

wow paige what an interesting story about a red indian and a Mummy, and they were in the sea. I hope the mummy didnt stay in the sea too long it would not be good for the bandages, unless he has a wet suit on.

Room 1 - The Beach and Beyond said...

Paige said that he wasn't wearing a wet suit! He died and all his bandages fell off when he was already dead! Oh no!!!